by Fiend in the Iron Maiden Aug 15, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Jack and jill ran up a hill |
Amazing turely amazing. 100/100 |
by meganmarie
WOW. amazing. beautifully written. such meaning and depth yet dark and twisted. i love how you twisted the nursery rhyme of jack and jill. it was definetly portrayed well. |
Wow, this poem is so true on so many levels. i loved the way you took a sweet nursery rhyme and made it into something deep and dark. greed is a demon that will drive people to kill. great poem. 5/5. one of my favorites. |
by Iris
This is WAY deep. and true. if only everyone will see that the devil can bring you down for what you think is only a little thing. i would give it higher, but the highest is 5...This was totaly awesome!!!! |
by Evil One
Wow, good poem; very creative |