Wow, good poem; very creative

This is WAY deep. and true. if only everyone will see that the devil can bring you down for what you think is only a little thing. i would give it higher, but the highest is 5...This was totaly awesome!!!!

Wow, this poem is so true on so many levels. i loved the way you took a sweet nursery rhyme and made it into something deep and dark. greed is a demon that will drive people to kill. great poem. 5/5. one of my favorites.

WOW. amazing. beautifully written. such meaning and depth yet dark and twisted. i love how you twisted the nursery rhyme of jack and jill. it was definetly portrayed well.
--lovedroughtmelody

Amazing turely amazing. 100/100