Comments : End of the World

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Truly awsome love your poem (^_^)
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LitxUpxWithxLife

    "as lies tell truths as truths tell lies" loved that line, i know exactly what you mean here.
    "Drops fall from trees as leaves rain from the sky." I like the imagery here, i actually pictured a drop of water from a tree in the rain lol. The idea behind this was great, at first i didn't see where you were going with it. But the final line did the entire poem justice. Another great poem, good job jenny. (5/5)