2nd stanza 3rd line "trying to to find love" you should probably take out one of the "to". Other then that it is a great poem that I greatly enjoyed. 5/5

I think this a good poem, but one thing i would change in the second paragraph is from
"my emotions have lost control
it hurts to keep it all in
trying to to find love
but only dying in the end"
to
" my emotions have lost control
it hurts to keep it all in
trying to find love
but only dying in it's sin"
but that's just my opinion, this poem was really good though, 5/5

I like to read ur poems,coz most of it about love :) and this one i loved as well.impressive:

make me believe again
that its easy to love you
simply because i do
with a love thats true