Nice job! very ... nice :]

5/5 one error though

Lying there next to him breathless on his beach

I think you meant " this beach"

Wow, Amber this was great!!! I liked it, lol like all your poems I read, they are awesome!

Love how I can picture this in my mind, it was great Amber!!

5/5

Beautiful peom it's like i am there... very describtive.