by PassionCourageTriumph Aug 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
first love
The moon shown down like heaven's veil, |
Such a romantic poem! Keep it up 5/5 |
by Cara
What a sweet love poem. It was written well and the imagery you created was good. The ending got to me a bit, i wasnt expecting it. But it did make the poem even better, to have a twist. |
by Sora
A very detailed piece. i loved it. it shows true emotions, and even though the ending is a little sad, i loved that part the most. a little twist is always good in a poem. wonderful job. 5/5. |
What a good poem that shows the beauty of young love 5/5.....Jim |
by Mia
Great! |