Comments : My self pity?

  • 20 years ago

    by Catherine Sawyer

    I agree it is a very deep emotional poem and I thought it was very touching it caught me up in it.
    Cathy. I only have one complaint and it might only be me the one with the little mind some of the words caught me off guard "amoeba " and "acclimatize" just my opion but could you use something that small minds like me lol could understand I stumble on those two
    Cathy

  • 20 years ago

    by Emilia

    hi, I'm glad you like my poem..
    I really like yours to..
    Keep up the good work

    I gave you a 5

    hugs from emilya

  • 20 years ago

    by Lucy

    that was a very good poem, im sorry if thats how you feel inside...keep writing

  • 20 years ago

    by Allen

    Very well writen, show great emotion, I love the wording and the flow of the poem :) Im sorry about how you feel.. hope you'll be happier ;) keep up the good work, take care :)