Comments : Where is "the end"?

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Love your poem awsome (^_^) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Common questions that many ask these days...i know some of the answers but i think it's better for you to discover the answers by yourself. and about love... yea i guss its true but not always the case

    good poem
    i enjoyed it

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    There are lots of questions but unfortunately there are no answers..all we can do is just wondering all the time and drowning ourselves in deep sadness...
    Ur poem is so true and simply written...I liked it a lot...
    Good job Nour,plz keep it up..
    Salam:D:D..

  • 16 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    Yes, so many things we wish we could know... But I don't think finding the answers would make me feel better, at least that seems to me; things would still be the way they are so, probably, I'd get even more depressed... Who knows?

    Well, it was an excellent thought-provoking poem. Keep it up!
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    You know what? that was REALLY good !!!!
    I totally loved it

    &"love"..wats that!!
    I think it is the source of pain
    Whenever we feel pain,
    It means we loved..

    this stanza is so touchy, I really loved the last 2 lines, omg they're so true bgd !!!

    And the last stanza, I sometimes wonder why do we have a life anyway !!
    that's really heartfelt hun =]
    very well-done
    & I loved the fact that it didn't rhyme, because I just wrote an unrhymed poem yesterday and I'm afraid to publish it, as its my very first one !
    I talked a lot, hehe..but I'm going to keep reading you rpoetry
    you keep it up ;)

  • 16 years ago

    by SeGrAdA

    I like it :^) & i feel i can relate to it :D
    i've always asked myself what's the purpose of being born & living :P guess we'll never know :P
    nwayz great poem keep it up gurl !D

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Again i like reading this but write the words
    out it just makes your poems look better
    this poem made me think of how easy the wrong chioce is like dying is easy its the
    living thats hard and so on. good stuff
    keep writting

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Well written.. some questions that most of us frequently ask ourselves.. questions to which we dont have any answers... good write...

    one suggestion- write the words.. dont write shortcuts... the words weave a different beauty.. :)

    keep writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    This is very nice i liked it... you seemed very out forward with you choice of words though, i might have put it differently but you are more unique i guess.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I can tell you that, we love and we are attached to this life because it give us soo much pain , and we hate death , becasue it releave us from them .

    love is god way to make us understand how week we are ,
    and make us understand , how much hurt he is in when we offend him and hurt him too !!

    love is god punishment and blessing to mankind,!!

    humanity's soul and cancer at the same time !!!
    very well writem poem even it is a bit strange writen , but i like the spontanious writting make it close to the heart !!

    greaat job