I really enjoyed this piece because you have to really read it and try to understand what it means to you. After the first few lines the words instantly make the reader want to continue on and find out whats creeping around the dark corner. I kind of got the feeling that she was selling her body to the night, she feels better when somebody is around to hold her or just be with her, but at the end of the night she's alone again. Excellent work with this piece it makes you think and it keeps you wanting more the whole time. Great work 5/5 GG23

Overall, this piece was amazing. I absolutely loved the word-choice for one. Every line, every word, brought so much to the poem. I really loved the feelings you portrayed in this write, I think a bunch of us can relate to that feeling of being alone at the end of the day or just anytime in particular. So wonderfully written. Unique write...I wouldn't change anything with this poem. 5/5

Excellent write! The one thing about this piece that caught my attention was the unique word choice! I loved it. Keep writing:)
5/5

"Her suffocating world closing in tightly
Arms unnoticeably moving to their comfort
Hugging her own susceptible open chest
The pieces of her well hidden at twilight"

I absoutely love your word choice here, and how you gave the reader a visual in their mind. Great emotions, and you made the reader feel what you were saying. This was beautifully written, and a joy to read from the beginning to the end. Keep writing, always and forever.....

Many years ago, I, too, was 'her'.....the feelings you have evoked in me in this piece have brought me as close to tears as anything I have read in a long time...

I just read this aloud to my partner...with all the meaning and emphasis I could muster...and the tiny tears did, indeed, rise to my eyes...wow..