Comments : How would Life Be...

  • 16 years ago

    by Crazy n luv

    DIFFERENT! But in a good way!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mohamed

    Unsual at the same time it was AWESOME

    i like it keep it up man!

  • 16 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Great! unique and thought provoking. and very true!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-this is very very clever rich.
    Very true though-i have actually contemplated this before on one of my random mind tangents-haha.
    Love the style, rhythm, rhyme and flow of your poem. Fits perfectly and is very good!

    5/5

    Aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Woww...i liked it...i cant really know what to say, but it was different, but in the same way really truly excelently put...nice write. keep it up 5/5