What if? (rap)

by Dustin S   Aug 16, 2008


What would happen if I quit rappin?
Would the readers mind be snappin?
I feel that I'm not noticed. That my rhymes are dirt.
Like my mind is sayin, your done. No time to hurt.
Well, thats my feeling right now. Like i'm done.
Had my fun, but dont think I'm the one.
I mean sure, I can whip up a song,
You can sit back, dont take that long.
But honestly em's right. Let them do this.
I cant even win in a simple diss!
Like a crippled rhymer, dont got no skill,
I loose when I'm about to home a kill.
So why should I keep goin when I never improve?
If anyone wants me to keep goin please PM me.
Cause I wanna know if there are fans that see
That I do try to be the best I can be.
Till then i dont know if i should leave.
I want a fan who would support and believe.
Yet stilll I dont know if I do have a fan.
But let me do this and try to be a cool man.
What if I gave up rap? What would go down?
What if I said I was done with all this goin round?
What if?

PLEASE PM ME IF YOU WANT TO SAY WEITHER I SHOULD STAY OR NOT**

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Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Kid Civic

    Stay. ur raps are great

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I'm a fan. i've read all ur raps. i don't comment because their so good i'm left speechless, and words just can'r describe how good they r. u can't quit! i'll comment on every rap if i have to! i'll stay up all night until every song is commented and u know how good u r! i'm not kidding, i'm a fan and i don't want u to quit!

    5/5
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Quiterrrr! Come on Deej we've had this talk before. If you quit you'll never improve. If you keep goin' you will.