Inside A Mad Mind

by Loveless   Aug 16, 2008


My mind revolves around
Broken hearts and bloody wrists
The perfect little stories
With perfect little twists

A silent plea for help
That slides down the cheek
The shattered soul inside
That’s just to weak

The blood that pours out
The slowly emptying vein
The puddle on the ground
The slowly numbing pain

Pitch black clouds
Rain pouring down
Voices keep talking
Without any sound

A body laying cold
A life now ends
People all around
Trying to make amends

Tears now are falling
For a wasted life
The blood that was shed
With the help of a knife

The broken heart
That hid it all
The pain and depression
Until the final fall

A world that now is ruined
A lasting final end
Left alone in darkness
No trace of any friend

The pain now is over
The heartache undone
The tortured soul
That can now see the sun.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    This is beautiful and very sad but real in so many peoples lifes. Written wonderful as always, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    Great poem I thought it flowed really good, it’s sad but I like the ending cause you tell that the pain is all over now! Its a nice deep sad poem, its tells the life of a cutter brilliantly!!! 5/5

    **plz comment bak**

  • 15 years ago

    by Conrad

    Great job. You're not the only one who feels that way. Good relations too.

  • 16 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    The first line was a little iffi... but the rest was simply flawless...the rhyming flows very nice. and your choice was beyond compare!! you expressed the darkness and sadness of a cutter brilliantly!!
    the people that she or he left behind, only stunned. like always they ignore that some one needs their help before it is too late.

    Like i said you have awsome talent! you better keep the poems coming girl!! =D

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

  • 16 years ago

    by Crippled Wing

    Great poem!!! I know what that's like

Read All Comments (6)

More Poems By Loveless