by Yeka
Dude thats really deep in the inner darkness awsome you know keep it up (^_^) |
Great poem!!! I know what that's like |
The first line was a little iffi... but the rest was simply flawless...the rhyming flows very nice. and your choice was beyond compare!! you expressed the darkness and sadness of a cutter brilliantly!! |
by Conrad
Great job. You're not the only one who feels that way. Good relations too. |
by P00ki3B3ar
Great poem I thought it flowed really good, it’s sad but I like the ending cause you tell that the pain is all over now! Its a nice deep sad poem, its tells the life of a cutter brilliantly!!! 5/5 |
by Em
This is beautiful and very sad but real in so many peoples lifes. Written wonderful as always, 5/5. Em |