The Last Image

by Yeka   Aug 16, 2008


I saw your name engraved in lead,
As your bullet hit my heart
Visions of your rushed to my head
My life now falling apart
I remember we had so much fun
On our very first date
Love came in the form of a gun
The trigger was your hate
Even though you caused me pain,
I will still forgive you
Your memory of my blood stain,
Will soon seep through
As my life flashes before my eyes,
Slowly I start to fall
You were always feeding me lies
I believe them all
The last image I saw was you
It made me realize
All this time I was being true
You created my demise.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Well thats a very lovely poem and your subject choice and metaphor choice was good i thought that matbe you could have stretched the idea a bit/used it a bit more but never the less it was still well thought out and executed.Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by justl0veme

    I LiKeD It iT wAs GoOd...i CoUld rElAtE

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading this write.

    "Visions of your rushed to my head"

    your should be you.

    "The last image I saw was you
    It made me realize
    All this time I was being true
    You created my demise."

    Great ending stanza, sums it up perfectly. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Aww.. so sad..=( but i have been there as well.. it is simple again but it say a lot.. am here for you... I love it .Awesome job =)

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