Ur poem is so touchable..It was kinda short but I really enjoyed reading it:)
Keep up the good work...

Aww.. so sad..=( but i have been there as well.. it is simple again but it say a lot.. am here for you... I love it .Awesome job =)

Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading this write.

"Visions of your rushed to my head"

your should be you.

"The last image I saw was you
It made me realize
All this time I was being true
You created my demise."

Great ending stanza, sums it up perfectly. Keep writing, always and forever....

I LiKeD It iT wAs GoOd...i CoUld rElAtE

Great job 5/5

Well thats a very lovely poem and your subject choice and metaphor choice was good i thought that matbe you could have stretched the idea a bit/used it a bit more but never the less it was still well thought out and executed.Well done

Grant