I died... loving you!

by CanUKissAwayMyPain   Aug 16, 2008


Fake smile.
Tears of pain.
love is gone.
so is this pain.
am all alone.
I have nothing to live for.
whatz a life without you!
I love you!
But the pain am going thought it enough!
I can't take it anymore.
My one and only love..
I just want you to know?
I died..
Loving you!!!

BANG!!!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Liked it! Very few words yet it's nice to read! Liked the emotions behind it. Well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Awwwww kool poem keep ^ the work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost and Delirious

    I like it and know how u feel. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    A very wonderful poem..Short but showed how much u loved him to death...And the flow of the poem was good as well...
    Awesome job,plz keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by Yeka

    Wow love really hurts and do a lot of sacrafice. Its truly beautiful truly love it. ANd yeah love really sux but either way thats life (^_^) 5/5 great job

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