Comments : I will die alone

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    That's so sad...ur poem is simply written but I think it would be great if u used rhyming...
    Anyway I really liked it..
    Good job,plz keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    This is so sad .. it simple but it says ur in pain.. I really love it nice job in this poem....

  • 16 years ago

    by xxXCrazyXNeonXGurlXxx

    Very good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Who could ignore such a plea?
    It made me feel all sad inside:(
    I hope you are doing ok..

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Fluffy

    Awsome dark and sad love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jess and cait

    Great poem thanks for the comment

    5/5
    jess