The blood countess (Collab with TJ BECKER)

by Goth marionette   Aug 17, 2008


The blood countess (Elizabeth Bathory)

A dark haired beauty of tender years,
Is touched by evil and kindles fears.
A malignant force runs through her veins
A soulless shell as blood she rains
Fair servant girls she does enslave
Tortured and bleed in ways depraved

In her huge castle of broken mirrors,
Where screams are concealed in its terror,
Her accursed desire stirs everyday.
As drinking blood lets her outstay.
Old skin renewed in the bloody baths.
The innocent saturated by her wrath.

Teeth rip and tear as flesh she devours
650 died to engorge youthful powers
Buckets of blood ran across her floor
Like waves lapping against evils shore
Wickedness built its roots in the air
Forsaken, by her deeds, was the snare.

To be forever the darkness bride.
No matter how hard she had tried,
Hate blocked her way to forgiveness
Surrounded by bloody madness
When girls she picked from nobility
Authorities approached with hostility

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    OH!! Away from how amazing, dark, and magnificant this peice is, the way the it flows is quite impressive, you can't tell who wrote wut but you can feel the influence of each of you 2.

    Impressive

  • 16 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    Once again wonderful love it yay! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by My Broken Element of Love

    This poem has widened my horizons of the meaning of dark and intriguing. It is a very intertwining piece of literature that I continue to marvel over.

  • 16 years ago

    by Paul London

    I commented to Tj that I loved this poem. Just wanted to say great job by you as well. Perfect desriptive words of the Dark Queen.

  • 16 years ago

    by dante

    Definantly my type of poem, vampyres are my passion. while the bulk of the poem flowed, there were a few slightly disjointed pieces that limited the impact marginally. overall though, one of the best vampyric poems ive read in ages. exellent