Comments : Winter Mariners

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    This poem is very deep I had to read it twice to get the full message it is very well written with a good choice of words that fitted the message you were trying to give perfectly.

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    "Some paths are there just to be crossed.
    And words won't be talked over
    As winds will gasp and storms will pass
    Your ship will be turned over"
    These were very beautiful words.
    "Pick up your story from the end
    Open your eyes, never pretend
    Ther is a harbor for all ships
    A cave to hide when winter sings."
    These were very professional phrases.
    But the best is the last part...
    "Call out to everything you love
    And it shall hold you dear.
    Until the ghosts upon your path
    Shall fade and disappear"