Pain (Revisited)

by PassionCourageTriumph   Aug 17, 2008


There is no escape from pain.
It takes you over as it's domain.
No way you can hold it back.
Always there, ready to attack.

Heart starts racing.
Feet start pacing.
Completely loosing what's left of your mind.
Chills running up and down your spine.

After you have had enough,
Acting without delay.
You hold that knife to your wrist,
And you cut away.

Watching the blood wash down the drain,
Feeling the numb take over the pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    That is an excellent poem! but concerning, my freind. It sounds like you have a lot of pain aswell. I wish I could take them away. :(

  • 16 years ago

    by charles

    Not a bad rhyme. liked the part of it always being there ready to take over w/o escape

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow, great ryme , very strong :]

    i like it! goin on my favs!

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