The Heartless Horseman

by Faithless Watermelon   Aug 17, 2008


He wakes up in the morning wondering why,
Sitting up, he wishes he could just stay down,
Just another day wishing life would let him die,
Waining, faltering in the guilt that makes him drown..

I am the Heartless Horseman,
Please guide me to her grave,
I feel not fear nor pain, but I want it to begin,
So I must find my heart to become brave

Your Heartless Horseman travels to the abyss,
Dashing, running, hunting in a sea of hearts,
In my haste Is there something that I miss,
Has my heart dried up and become parts?

This Heartless Horseman the angel does not embrace,
She only keeps my heart in her tender grip;
I start to run, the heart begins to race,
So near I am startled by her tears, and start to trip..

My Heartless husk slams the ground, face in the blood;
The colors fade and I clutch to life like a hungry leech,
But I feel winter crawl up my spine and I hear no thud,
The last thing I want is to see what was just out of reach..

The wind of winter tosses me upon my back,
I let myself stop breathing but I open my eyes;
The sight is but a statue holding my heart attack,
So near the end I see the angel was a bold disguise

The Heartless Horseman lies in the pool of tears,
Searching for his share of peace before the end;
He's been waiting for so many drawn-out years,
To reclaim what time had refused to mend

The out of place sensation of warmth had finally found its way to the Heartless Horseman, giving him something to feel before he at last found his peace. The only regret he may have had is that he didn't hold on long enough to truly feel it.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    So many of the things I was thinking. I am amazed that this piece is so in depth. It is very creative and emotional and the story of it is stunning. Anyway I'll keep this comment shortish, excellent job on this piece.

  • So sad... are you sure you're 15? this sounds to me like a man who has been tossed around by life. this is such an amazing piece. like i said the emotin is just...sad. great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Suicide

    Ummmm Alex Was Right That Strangely Touched Me....But It Is Possiably The Best Poem I've Read In The Past 6 Months I Mainly Like:

    He wakes up in the morning wondering why,
    Sitting up, he wishes he could just stay down,
    Just another day wishing life would let him die,
    Waining, faltering in the guilt that makes him drown..

    All Right Well I've Got To Say You've Got A Pretty Sick Twisted Talent...But We ALl Do In Our Own Lil Way....L@T3R

  • 16 years ago

    by The Herald

    Rather good, though you used "heart" an AWFUL lot!
    the imagery was good, though i didn't understand most of it XD, it brought the mood to a melancholic state, which i found to be very appealing right now

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I really like the title first of all because it's definately an attention grabber. I see a lot of poems on this site with excellent titles and then when I go to read them the poem itself is horrible haha Not in this case though you complimented the title very well and I enjoyed the read. "The colors fade and I clutch to life like a hungry leech" I really loved that line I thought it was very strong and poetic. Excellent work 5/5 GG23