My Love For You

Good poem

Wow how sweet! the words really has a great expressons.. and i love this 2nd stanza very much...

My love for you is like the wind, although impossible to see it is always there. I am the flicker in your golden hair, the gentle breeze on your beautiful skin.

this lines has a great feelings that i can truly relate, it filled w/ sweet words and very romantic piece of poetry, the message was absolutely powerful even the flow was really iimpressive.. love it 5/5

Aww its so cute haha everytime i read it i smile so big :) every word of your poems means a lot to mean because thats exactly what i feel for you. like some poeple jsut put a lot of b.s in their poems to make them rhyme and what not, but you can write exactly what you and i both feel, and not make it choppy but instead easy to read and meaningful... so for that ill give it a 5/5 and because your my favorite baby ever :)

i loved how you compared your love for me, :), to an ocean, the wind, the sun, and the autumn rain. it was so pretty how you related them together, and still managed to make sense. i mean, knowing me hahaha, i would have been like, "my love for you is like an ocean. salty and blue." hahahh idk, but it wouldnt have been that good. lmao. wow, hm so about that

so back to the real poem :p

My love for you is like an ocean, the depth could never be fathomed. I am the salt that surrounds your every inch, I am the shores that caress your every motion.

^ omg i lovee that, because this is what i feel for you, like oceans go on forever, for miles and miless on end, just like our love, and when your in the water, your surrounded by it, just like our thoughts are consumed with thoughts about each other :) its so cute... idk if i said this, but 5/5 yayayaya :)

i love you :D

I agree with the above, very creative format you have used here..You were very descriptived towards your feelings for her..The passion was so vividly recognised..Good Job..

Beautiful, every line, just amazing.