This is a very creative formating or at least the first time I have read on like this

The metaphors transend natural imagery to accent the sensual romantic love expressed

It beautifully written and I ejoyed reading this one
5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Wow. This is written absolutely beautifully. You did a great job expressing your love for this person you're talking about. I felt as though the emotion poured from your words. It's wonderful.

Five out of five.

``Briana

This another one of the rare poems that makes me quite jealous that I couldn't think of putting the same words in the same order.. but before you did 0.o

It would seem obvious that you put some thought into this, but the flow was near flawless and it seemed like you just let your heart and mind flow through your fingers and into what would become words. Anyways, this was a wonderful write and if you ever stopped writing i may have to beat you with an ugly stick

Great job, this is a very beautiful piece
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Your choice of wording was great and the flow worked very well. 5/5

This was....
I'm speechless.

I've never read a love poem that I could feel this strongly. I can practically feel your heart beating for this person. It is absolutely incredibly powerful.
Everything fit in its place, and everything worked more than ok.
Wonderful job.
This is perfection!

Lexie

"My love for you is like autumn rain, It ripples across the top of your water. The sun rises through a sapphire sky, as the moon begins to stray."

this part seemed to be a bit odd, as referring to "her water" seems to insinuate that, you are keeping her moving.
I didn't really like this, it just put too much emphasis on you, how YOU do all these things, flicker her hair, move her, and such. yes, i realize im practically the only negative comment, but that's what these are for right?

3/5 (would be 0 but the rhyme and iambic pentameter are really nice :D)

Beautiful, every line, just amazing.

I agree with the above, very creative format you have used here..You were very descriptived towards your feelings for her..The passion was so vividly recognised..Good Job..

Aww its so cute haha everytime i read it i smile so big :) every word of your poems means a lot to mean because thats exactly what i feel for you. like some poeple jsut put a lot of b.s in their poems to make them rhyme and what not, but you can write exactly what you and i both feel, and not make it choppy but instead easy to read and meaningful... so for that ill give it a 5/5 and because your my favorite baby ever :)

i loved how you compared your love for me, :), to an ocean, the wind, the sun, and the autumn rain. it was so pretty how you related them together, and still managed to make sense. i mean, knowing me hahaha, i would have been like, "my love for you is like an ocean. salty and blue." hahahh idk, but it wouldnt have been that good. lmao. wow, hm so about that

so back to the real poem :p

My love for you is like an ocean, the depth could never be fathomed. I am the salt that surrounds your every inch, I am the shores that caress your every motion.

^ omg i lovee that, because this is what i feel for you, like oceans go on forever, for miles and miless on end, just like our love, and when your in the water, your surrounded by it, just like our thoughts are consumed with thoughts about each other :) its so cute... idk if i said this, but 5/5 yayayaya :)

i love you :D

Wow how sweet! the words really has a great expressons.. and i love this 2nd stanza very much...

My love for you is like the wind, although impossible to see it is always there. I am the flicker in your golden hair, the gentle breeze on your beautiful skin.

this lines has a great feelings that i can truly relate, it filled w/ sweet words and very romantic piece of poetry, the message was absolutely powerful even the flow was really iimpressive.. love it 5/5

Good poem