Comments : With the Dawn

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Glad to see references to the bible :]
    guessing your doing better,
    this poem makes me happy

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    I love the beginning, you just make the dawn such a beautiful thing instead of the start of another day, it becomes much more than that. I like the reference to the bible. I can't really explain this, but I feel hope and power. This piece in inspirational. I love it yet again.
    Wonderful!

    Lexie