Comments : But Raindrops on the Breeze

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisiblyHeartless

    I read it yesterday and didn't know what to say. I read it today and thought the same. I'm speechless. Gabby, you write so beautifully. This is just touching and gorgeous. I love it.
    I especially like the beginning:
    Warm nothing hovers over us,
    shouting of a significant insignificance.
    Stars burst forth like fireworks,
    bearing songs of creation.

    This is so powerful. I can't think of words to really describe it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Phantasmagoria

    I'm amazed. Every beginning line of the stanza shout out and each other following are so beautifully written...