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by Ixora
Beautiful imagery this poem was felt to the soul. *^*Crow*^*
by Cindy
Debbie What a sad heart wrenching piece. Fields of poppies, a posy Pennies make us proud Gardens of stone, a river Morning's misty shroud The memories of those who fought for our freedom and what the poppy represents. Folded flag, a triangle Sand swept battle scars Sunset taps remembrance Black crepe, golden star A flag, the haunting sound of taps being played. A medal. All that's left of some. Acorns strewn, an arbor Mother's barren womb Refrain of fossil teardrops Sapling's marble tomb How hard to bury your child. From battles fought. Widows of oak, an eagle Shadows on the sun Lullabies to dirges Retorts, count twenty one The end the 21 gun salute. As each shot is fired it feels like they die again and again. Great job! Love Cindy
by Prince Jared
Very, very descriptive, though the poem seems to stop almost prematurely in every stanza. But I'll give it a 5/5. :)