I think this is clever and mostly well written but some of the stanzas work better than others. I like most of them, but I think there's too many 'ideas' and repetitions here, it becomes predictable after a while. However, saying that. It's unique and a sweet sentiment, too.

This was so much different than any other friendship poems Ive come across on this site. Youve out done yourself here, I really enjoyed this because ti wasnt your normal cheesy friendship poem, it was something so much different and created with a unique mindset. I think this was great. Theres nothing I can personally tell you to change, (: