Slumbering Hope (Rictameter)

by gracey grey   Aug 18, 2008


Arise
Slumbering hope
Cascade upon the gloom
Elude not your power of strength
Distant drum echoes chilling every nerve
Resurrect then from reverie
Let it be known you exist
Defeat grace now
Arise

Rictameter : 9 line poetry form with syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 10, 8, 6, 4, 2. The 1st and last line are of the same word.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Wow this is a beautiful poem to read and to look at as well, If i may say either put a comma between drums and echoes or remove the s from echoes otherwise this really was a lovely poem. The Grace refered to in the poem was that you?
    Really a well written very beatiful verse well done

    Grant

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