Life's Rhymeless Beat

This is such a heart breaking situation to see/read but it happens and there is no one to rescue to them. I like the way you have written this..touching.

There is so much pain in this poem...I know this world is a very grim place to people less fortunate than us in the western world.
You portrayed their cluel fate in a superb way.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

All to true which it should not be in this age. Well done.

Somberly wonderful opening lines to a poem with a very strong message.........
Life can be so cruel and the extend it drives people choose such sickly saddening path..... choices chosen without a choice really.....very sad. Last stanza is really touching....."Life's brutal issues" really remains unanswered........and life still goes on just for the sake of survival in conditions whether acceptable or not.

What a heart wrenching piece. Eye opening and thought provoking. Excellent flow and well done telling this sad story. It is hard to believe travesties like this occur in the world.