Comments : This Fake Smile

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like how you ended this babe, and dont worry i have read your poem, i have heard your pain. and i will help and i will not walk away x

    i knwo its hard to trust people, an di know its so hard to talk about these things but it can be done, and not everyone will hurt you, true friends will always be there for you to help you through.

    keep writing honey xxxxxxxxxx

  • 15 years ago

    by xLeftxBehindx

    I can relate to this poem! I really like it too. It flows really well I could just read it over and over. I love all of your poems even if they are painful they just have so much emotion in them! GREAT write, amazing job and uuhh keep writing! Excellent!