by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Aug 18, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The night betrays the day as you betray the dead. |
by Lauren
I love it. It's dark but brilliant. Great Imagery!! It flows really well also. |
by tigerdan
Powerful, yet very chilling. It brings me strong emages in my mind, good job! |
by Rachel RTVW
Way too many I's and you's and filler words. Thought provoking concept, but you need some editing. Make the most of each word, remove the unnecessary ones. It has potential. |
by Mr. Darcy
Jen, I will comment on this as I read, so excuse me if I make no sence at all :/ |
by Travis
Wowowowowowowowow |