by Yeka
Awsome love it (^_^) |
by Blissful
"You're the depressing tail of an immortal man" |
by Amber
O wowww |
This poem is soo deep, dark, whatever. It's amazing though. I have never read a poem with such a wonderful flow in my entire life. This poem deserves to be nominated. Perfectly written. It paints a clear image in my mind when I read it. Very well done. 5/5! |
by Travis
Wowowowowowowowow |
by Mr. Darcy
Jen, I will comment on this as I read, so excuse me if I make no sence at all :/ |
by Rachel RTVW
Way too many I's and you's and filler words. Thought provoking concept, but you need some editing. Make the most of each word, remove the unnecessary ones. It has potential. |
by tigerdan
Powerful, yet very chilling. It brings me strong emages in my mind, good job! |
by Lauren
I love it. It's dark but brilliant. Great Imagery!! It flows really well also. |