Loving You

by Gwen   Aug 18, 2008


A boy and a girl
The best of friends
Elementary to High School
Beginning to end

Through all those years
Their friendship grew
They both felt the same
But never knew

Each walking moment
Since the day they met
They loved each other
Sunrise to sunset

He was all she had
In her terrible life
He was the one who
Kept her away from her knife

She was his angel
She made him smile
Though life through him curves
She made it worth while

Then one day
Things went terribly wrong
The next few weeks
Were like a very sad song

He made her jealous
On purpose, he tried
The girl asked, "Do you love her?"
On purpose he lied

He played with jealousy
Like it was a game
Little did he know
Things would never be the same

His plan was working
But he still had no clue
How wrong things would go
The damage he would do

One night she broke down
Feeling all alone
Just her and her blade
Nobody else home

She dialed his number
He answered "Hello"
She whispered "I Love You"
Then hung up the phone

He raced to her house
But already too late
Found her lying in blood
Her heart had no rate

Beside her was a note
In it her confession
Her love for this boy
Her lovely obsession

As he read the note
He knelt down and cried
Grabbed her knife
That night they both died

She was found in his arms
Both of them dead
Under her note
His hand writing said

She loved me so much
Though I never knew
And all this time
I loved her too

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  • 15 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Omg! I love this poem! It's great! I can't believe you made it all rhyme and it made sense! Keep it up (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Kare

    It awesome, though it is very sad and very tragic.