I do, love you

by Rachel   Aug 18, 2008


His love. amazing.
These emotions. overwhelming.
Yearning for an escape my deviance took the best of me.
My love expanded, as wide as the ocean
as deep as the sea,
and then... he left me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Dammmmmmmmm poem was beutiful til
    the end

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Eff him sweetheart!!! he left you? uhhh he left some beautiful poetry... hey i liked this... i like those pauses with the periods makes it cool. :)
    lovely 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Good write! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    Ouch!!
    these last words were like a punch in the face
    the poem ended quickly!! and sadly
    i wish the end wasnt breakup :(

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