Deeeeeeeeeepuh. This is hella good.

Well, I'll have to agree with Disaster.. this was very good.. I'm glad I read it. Keep it up.

Overall Rating: 5.5/6

I've never ever heard a love poem that sounded this way. I mean I know all love poems are different, but they all have the same somewhat sappy feelings behind them...This one felt differently. Like a longing, not a sappy needing. It's the way you describe things. Like in this poem it sounds almost painful to miss this person and then you compare it to the wind so well that it's as if you're totally in love with the wind and not a person at all. I don't exactly know the words to use to describe it, but it gave me the chills. You have a great talent for descriptions!

excellent work!

Wow this was beautiful. extremely deep. a write from the heart, i loved it all. you have a great talent. don't quit writing! job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.