Wow... i love it >.<

so beautful, and sweet.

good ryme!

5/5

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Love it truly wonderful (^_^) 5/5

This one is just okay for me also
I notice you repeat words a lot
Try to avoid that and if you are going to repeat
make sure it's in the next stanza
Again with the period then one word
people read that as wrong flow
again add some new words
4/5