On the Edge

by Amir Riveroll   Aug 19, 2008


Im Leanin on the edge
trying not to fall
ripping out all my hair
and now im bald
im so stressed
im wondering if i should breathe
is it worth it to continue suffering
when there is no more blood to bleed

theres nothing left
im totally dry
somtimes its better if i would just give up
shribble up and die
why is it so hard
to just move one step
there is no more road
im becoming desperate

And i was the one
to say everything will work out
theres a reason for all
but now for answers, im all out

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Im sorry Murf but i think it would be better of you'll categorize it as a funny one..I think ull get more votes if you change it..Hahaha....I dint intend to laugh but i couldnt stop laughin while readin it..The picture was so clear, yep its a funny thing..hahaha esp the hair thing..Although the last stanzas mellowed a bit..Nice one Murf..xDD

  • 16 years ago

    by Nawa

    Nice poem, you can totally sense and feel the emotions and sorrow in the words. Great work, keep it up.