Peacefully fins glide in innocence,
As rain falls down upon the surface,
Silently echoing in physical resonance,
Subtlety breaks; Mesmerizing residents.

*This is such a beautiful stanza. I love the imagery and the diction is amazing*

Nature's tears slip slowly off leaflets,
Crashing softly down on rigged plains,
The emerald housing of the lesser; Flooding,
As panic emanates from voiceless victims.

*Wow...you have such a way with words. I love the flow and how constant it is.*

Soaring through the source of gloom,
Where dismal giants reign over earth.
Swiftly winged critters navigate and observe,
As tear-less eyes think only of the flightless.

*You express the emotions so clearly. I love that, makes the poem easy to read*

Staring out transparent barriers,
We watch in ignorance of the tragedy,
As the eye is coy in nature,
The mind of man is both distracted, yet intrigued.

*You are so talented. This poem was perfect. Everything about this poem was creative. The imagery and strong emotions helped paint a very lovely picture for me. Nice work. Nik*