Stumbling, Mumbling

by Leah20   Aug 19, 2008


I trip along this path
Stumbling on words sent before
Flung from my own mouth
I'm intentionally unintentional,
Or was that unintentionally intentional?
I'm not really sure any more.

Can you love me if I'm not broken?
Can you hold me if I don't cry?
What if happiness could survive?
Would it carry love far?
Would it carry it at all?
Can love and happiness coinside?
Like love and marriage supposidly do?
But never seem to work out to?

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  • 16 years ago

    by StarGirl

    I agree with HidinVIctim on I loved the last stanza and the flow was very good. I can really relate most of it and "Can you love me if I'm not broken" is especially relateable.

  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    I like this alot i especially like the last stanza, the flow was good but i would love to see this broken down into small stanzas having just the two makes it look too blocky for me but still great job... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mishka

    Wow i really love how you wrote this...
    obviously you're talking about a communication problem (in my head at least)... if we can't communicate properly... even love fails.

    short and portrays an important message. :) 5/5

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