Wow i really love how you wrote this...
obviously you're talking about a communication problem (in my head at least)... if we can't communicate properly... even love fails.

short and portrays an important message. :) 5/5

I like this alot i especially like the last stanza, the flow was good but i would love to see this broken down into small stanzas having just the two makes it look too blocky for me but still great job... 5/5

I agree with HidinVIctim on I loved the last stanza and the flow was very good. I can really relate most of it and "Can you love me if I'm not broken" is especially relateable.