BRAVO! *CLAP* THAT WAS WONDERFUL! It was really meaninful what this poem said. and yes i have gone through these stuff. i loved this poem. it was long but it was worth reading every line of it because now i know im not the only person going through this too. keep writing. you have talent!
-Stephanie

"Have you ever lost someone
So close to your heart?
Have you ever been so in love
That in the end, it tears you apart?"

"Have you ever felt alone
That you think you should just leave?
Have you ever tried to cover up every hidden scar
Underneath your sleeve?"

"Have you ever lost yourself
And everything you ever were?
Have you ever become broken
Because he only wants 'her'?"

^These three stanzas stood out to me because those are the ones I am experiencing now.I'm glad I inspired you to write it.Very good.5/5

-amber-

"Have you ever lost someone
So close to your heart?
Have you ever been so in love
That in the end, it tears you apart?"

"Have you ever felt alone
That you think you should just leave?
Have you ever tried to cover up every hidden scar
Underneath your sleeve?"

"Have you ever lost yourself
And everything you ever were?
Have you ever become broken
Because he only wants 'her'?"

^These three stanzas stood out to me because those are the ones I am experiencing now.I'm glad I inspired you to write it.Very good.5/5

-amber-

"Have you ever been labeled a "Freak"
Because of the things you say and feel?
Have you ever experienced so much pain
That you start to believe that things arn't real?"
- I liked that one the best becase I feel I can relate to it more than the others. Also 'arn't' should be 'aren't'.
This was amazing, yes it was long, but very, very meaningful. I really liked it.
5/5, Nice work

Wow. wow. wow. wow. wow. WOW. That is nothing less then AMAZING. Truthfully, its one of the best ive read in a while. I can honestly relate to every single stanza youve poured out here. Its so intense and powerful. And i belive a lot of people are gunna relate to this. Youve done an excellent job here and its added to my favs. Keep this up. Its incredible. 5/5

Wow, I love this poem, even though it has lots of questions its just wow. Great work

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Wow. this is truly amazing, it touched my heart and I can say yes to most of it. 5/5, Em

I'm still in love with this piece lol :) x