I miss you already

by Mo   Aug 19, 2008


Tell me you can read my thoughts
Ten thousand miles away
And tell me its ok to cry
when I cant think of what to say

Tell me that you loved me
just one more time my friend
and tell me this short parting
does not spell the end

Tell me you'll come join me
to laugh within my dreams
that I may glimpse your wild wild ways
and all of your extremes

Tell me colours dont fade to black
once the heart stops beating
and that I'll see your colours soon
upon our destined meeting

And finally dont tell me
any messages of goodbye
for all that you have left in us
death's grip you can defy.

For Elisabetta

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  • 14 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Oh Mo, I haven't read this poem since you first posted it. Rereading it now has made me cry. This is so very beautiful and it comes within instants of touching our beautiful Elisabetta. I miss her dearly.
    Her spirit was a gift to us.
    The brightest flame burns quickest.

    Miss you! Come back to us in THE CLUB. We alllll miss you, lady.

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    This makes me think of one of my best friends who lives sooo far away from me, so you touched off for me, from the beginning. Some nice work and I think for the most part your flow was pretty on. I enjoyed this. Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Touching, sweetly deep, and authentically real......

    I also have lived this poem...

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicko

    Yes Mo this is beautiful, i too would like to write a poem for Liz but the words evade me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Love you Mo this is beautiful

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