by XxFallenxFromxGracexX Aug 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
[This poem is about my recent break up, it sucked and it still hurts...and to make things worse, we had been best friends for liek a yearbefore we started going out, and yea he hurt me pretty bad, and now were no were near as close as we were...i hope u like the poem its not great, but i had to get it off my chest] |
by kelleyana
This is a touching heart felt piece, but tell yourself that, you two were not made for each other. Don't force your destiny. With time, and when you came upon the right person, you will see that memories of her almost erase from your memory. Very good piece, kel. |
by Maverick
This poem is beautiful. It hurts so much only because it evokes so much emotion out of me, but it is so eloquent yet simple at the same time. I really love how the last stanza wraps it up so well. I encourage everyone who goes through a break up to delve into poetry. I hope you have found happiness now, and I know this is an old poem but it's a truly great write, and the beautiful thing about our poetry and our words is they act in the present just as well as the day we wrote them up. I love it. Great job. |
by haunted
OMG this poem is sooooo greattt!!!!! |
by LoreNz0
How could u say this poem isnt that great when you hav put so much life and emotion into it? it was a fabulous poem coz it conveyed all ur inner thoughts in a beautiful way. great poem, tyhings will start looking up... in time. =) |
by Weeping Wolf
Aww god how i know how that feels...great imagery i love how you just laid your feelings out. i do that with many of my poems check them out if you want. really nice job with this one. |