This poem has been one of the best poems I've read in a while, and no I'm not lying or kissing a**. Your rhyme scheme here was very good, I liked how you kept the flow going from word to word, it just kept be on edge and made me smile while reading. All I see is true passion from reading this, raw emotion, I have no idea what else to say besides emotion and passion.

This was a pure sentimental poem, it breathes affection. Showing this person how much you feel for them no matter how many flaws they have, your writing it as if you dont care how she looks, she may be different but you will always love her and never see her as any different.

The feeling I get from this poem is pure inflactuation and desire. I have no other words to be this as.

I truly love this poem. This poem means so many things in so many different ways. I just love it.

"and so it shall be until my last day
in my mind no one can take you away"

This was one of my favorite parts, I loved it. Such passion here, I loved it truly. I know I keep saying the word passion and love and blah blah blah but I really do like this poem.

"Just cause you're different from all of the rest
just know in my heart you you're always the best"

This was a great start, this would really draw readers in. In most cases love has no boundaries and you telling this girl that you still love her no matter what, even if she is different was just so pure and I loved.

"I need no other nor do I desire
you're the flame in my heart the inextinguishable fire"

I liked how you used "Inextinguishable" that was a good word to use here. And the way you described everything here was amazing and intense. This was a very very good part of the poem one of my favorite parts, Just the way you said it brought tears to my eyes and made me feel all tight inside.

"I've told you from the start that I care for you
I know in your heart that you know that it's true"

This was so sweet, and precious. Your telling her that no matter what, and after everything you've said she still believes you, its in her heart. that she feels the same way and she knows it for a fact.

"and so it shall be until my last day
in my mind no one can take you away"

I know I commented on this earlier, but I really did love this, this was the best part of the poem the most emotional and passionate part of the poem.

This was a very good poem, even if it did take you like 5 minutes to write, I love this poem. and this is BY far the best poem you've ever written. This poem means so much to me. I love you, Mahal Kita, Iniibig kita my love.