What I'm Really Feeling, My Eyes Won't Let Me Hide

by Travis   Aug 19, 2008


What I'm really feeling, my eyes won't let me hide
This love is controlling, i cannot confide
It takes my breath away at first sight
I see us dancing in the future, it's so bright

What I'm really feeling, my eyes won't let me hide
I will always, no matter what, be by your side
You can be my august plum
You can chew me like bubble gum
I know we can make it, i know we can overcome

What I'm really feeling, my eyes won't let me hide
I heard last night you cried
We tried, and tried, but love kept falling behind
What can i say, love is blind

What I'm really feeling, my eyes won't let me hide
So here i am today, my feelings have been redefined
It hurts to much to think about
All i can do is scream and shout

What I'm really feeling, my eyes won't let me hide
I just wish it would all subside.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Great write. The flow was really good. First stanza you need to capitolize the one I that you missed, the stanzas were kind of odd I'd say. Some were 4 lines, one was 5, and another was 2. Really odd, but still you managed to keep a nice flow somehow. Great work, Trav. (: It's a wonderful write by you! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Aw the first stanza is beautiful. I loved the rhyming words. :)

    Lol, okay the food stanza made me giggle and smile. ^_^ That's cute.

    I liked the poem itself but I still say you need punctuation more and such. XD But that's just me. :)

    I enjoyed it, I'll give it a five. :)

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