Confusion

by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill   Aug 19, 2008


You Fooled her one to many times.
& all she did was get drowned in your lies.
she didn't do anything wrong.
it was you pretending all along.

Don't act like everythings fine.
when you can't even look her in the eyes.
she doesnt know what to do with you anymore.
All your doing is making her heart sore.

Not a day that goes by & she don't cry.
she's lost all hope.
when she lost you.
Now she only dreams.you feel like that to.

Now All it is memories.
she prays to be sane
She prays "please god just make the pain go away"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shadow Heart

    A Really Great Poem, Keep The Good Work Up.!

    5/5(:

  • 16 years ago

    by Hearts Abyss

    I really liked it, you are very talented and thanxx for the comment on my "I want a man poem" lolz I'll be sure to add this to my favz.

  • 16 years ago

    by TorturedTourniquet

    Really well done. The only thing I could say here is to keep an eye on your actual grammar and punctuation. Capitalize where you need to, end sentences if necessary, things like that. But I'm really OCD about that too, so...

    Good job!