"Has rested; fragmented;"
`Umm, I'm pretty sure you need commas instead of semi-colon's...

"Engraved beneath an illuminative eye"
`Word choice is fabulous! Engraved, illuminative, ect. Wonderful words.. great word choice. Very descriptive.

Overall, a wonderful write. Unique idea honestly. I really liked it. It makes you think as to what that object or thing is that can scratch a diamond. Norhan had a good idea, another diamond. I am not very sure as to what it is though. But another diamond does make sense. Unique poem. Wonderful word choice! 5/5

Wow, very amazing poem. You were very descriptive and a very wonderful job. And I do agree with Rikki, I also think this poem was writtne, soley for the amusement of people anwsering your question. But overall very beautiful poem.

5/5

Hmm is the answer another diamond? I dont know...

This was amazing! Each word just fit perfectly, there were no fillers or anything of that sort, just straight poetry. I loved the words you choose to use here because they were packed with meaning and power. The descriptions here helped created a flawless piece of imagery in my mind throughout the time I was reading the piece. The flow here was just perfect and overall made this an amazing piece. Nothing left to say but that I loved it. Your talent just shines through this piece.

Well done.
*5/5*

Short and very well written poem. I liked the way you've described it. A good interesting write!