HEARTACHE
by shawn hoskins Aug 19, 2008
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Heartache is nothing new to me, I've had to live and learn, had a relationship I let crash and burn, had a girl I loved but had to set free, and I know she gave me her all I was just to blind to see, I made my mistakes I'm just a man, she reached out for me but I wasn't there to hold her hand, it hurt so bad when it all fell apart, now I'm left here with nothing, nothing but a broken heart |
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15 years ago
by Good Enough
Hurting someone doesnt just hurt the person, it hurts urself too and i love how u pointed that ou in this poem. it was really well written and had alot of good ways of making the person wanting to read on good job :)
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16 years ago
Very straight from the heart lyrical poem
I feel the emotion and can totally relate
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16 years ago
by xXxemzxXx
Hey great poem i really loved it, i liked the way you portrayed it and it also had a lot of emotion through it too great work and the flow was great too 5/5 :)
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16 years ago
Great poem, i normally don't like the paragraph style poetry but still managed to catch the rhyme. I love the emotions that are swimming behind your words. I understand this poem all too well. The last line has "I'm", not sure if that's what you meant. Maybe i'm just not catching it. But an outstanding poem. (5/5)
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16 years ago
by Adelle
I love this the is so much emotion in it I don't agree with Shinobi I think the flow was perfect yes stanzas would have added a depth to this piece but the is nothing in the flow that causes a problem. This poem is very good I would have liked to read more maybe making it a bit longer would be a suggestion?
