by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Aug 20, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
He opens the door and it's new place. |
by Yeka
Hey wsome poem truly wonderful work keep it up Jennifer (^_^) 5/5 |
by H E Losey
Quite an interesting read! I enjoyed the entire story line throughout this piece. My only critique is with the metre/rhythm it is just not there. My example would, I think, get it for the first stanza. |