Lost friend
by Mr You Aug 20, 2008
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Goodbye my lost friend goodbye |
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16 years ago
by Yeka
Well its hard to say bye to a friend that you have known for a long time.........truly come out true emotions (^_^) love it **HUG** 5/5
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16 years ago
by marclin
Saying good bye could mean sadness for us... for others maybe happinessperhaps,,,but mostly the latter one...
in this poem sadness is there yet i can sense that the feeling sadness is shallow...maybe you havn't poured out your true emotions here....or maybe the choice of words doesn't much to what you excatly mean....
sometimes a poem - specially when it involves human emotions - it would be better that you dig deeper...for example in this poem all i can feel is sadness that will pass immediately....correct me if i'm wrong....but what's deeper than sadness is grief....and as a reader i want to feel grief and loss in saying good bye if the poem i'm reading is about sadness....
but,,, it's a good poem...just push right thru your true emotions when writing my friend..... -
16 years ago
Colby bear...
